After reading my blog post "The Right Choice" I have come to the conclusion that thing I need to work on most is still my sentence length. I chose this area for improvement still based on how long some of my paragraphs are. Yet I did improve on making sure that my paragraph were on topic and didn't loose there ideas throughout the statement. At this point I think my goal that I really need to press upon myself is to go back a reread a paragraph once I finish it just so I can make some small changes or little revise areas.
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